I decided to scale back the amount of shading, since it was getting a bit mad in the last page. I think this is a bit more elegant. I think? Anyway, back out into the corridor, no more cruddy flat. Phew.
The new vote incentive is a painting of a character from the next scene. Since this one is nearly done. Whooooo.
2 thoughts on “Page 30”
Warsmith Bob
1. I second zippo’s statement.
2. He must be a terrible secret agent is he “thinks” he can’t tell her. Either you will or you won’t, there is no “Think”.