Monday’s page took about ten hours, this one took less than three. Go figure. At least I’m roughly sticking to a six hour average, which is my goal.
Also, someone is about to get shivved. Maybe.
Edit: I redid the final panel rather majorly when I realised that what was supposed to be a sword blade looked way more like a fallen beam or something along those lines. Obviously that changes the tone of the page rather substantially… hopefully it’s more obvious now. The old version is here.
11 thoughts on “Page 22”
hey sawbones
That is possibly the best method of obscuring speech that I have ever seen in a comic.
I love it.
Warsmith Bob
Ok, forget what I said last page.
I would tell her to run, but the way this is looking, she would trip over the magic-invisible-disappearing-tripping-hazard and lay on the ground until our stabby friend reached her.
Ruby
DAAH! Sword! Sharp thingie! Run…er, whatever your name is, run!
CartoonManiac
I like the color palette. It has a nice texture, as if it were done by watercolors. It gives it more of that eerie look.
Aeva
The figure holding the blade really makes it clear now. Good eye.
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